表示 与此同时 的英文

表示 与此同时 的英文

比如说，现在很多年轻人去大学读书，与此同时呢，有很多人也投身到教育事业

a mounting of young people go into universities to get a degree, as well as more and more people are devoted themselves to education.

这样可以吗？as well as 可不可以换个高级点的短语？就是两个句子链接的紧密些，不要出现太多的逗号

for example , a great number of young people go to college for obtaining a degree or a diploma , meanwhile , many people are devoted to education career

for example, Some young people choose to go to college ,,however, others devote themselves to their education career

A lot of people dedicate themselves to education career when many young people go to college

on the other hand

one the one hand, one the other hand

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